주제: If you thought your friend was eating too much fast food, what would you do?
답변:
First, I would ask my friend how many times he/she eats fast food a week.
Second, if the number of times for eating fast food is more than twice a week, then I will explain to him/her about the negative effect of fast food and recommend him to reduce the number of times to eat fast food.
Last, I will introduce alternatives of fast food to him/her for his/her healthier life.
첨삭한 내용:
First, I would ask my friend how many times he/she eats fast food a week.
>First, I would ask my friend how often he/she eats fast food a week. (alternative)
Second, if the number of times for eating fast food is more than twice a week, then I will explain to him/her about the negative effect of fast food and recommend him to reduce the number of times to eat fast food.
> Next, if he/she eats fast food more than twice a week, then I will explain to him/her the negative effects of fast food and recommend him to cut down on fast food. (rephrased)
Last, I will introduce alternatives of fast food to him/her for his/her healthier life.
>Lastly, I will introduce alternative food to him/her for his/her healthier life. (rephrased)
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