안녕하세요 지식마블입니다.
영어첨삭 예시보여드려요
Q> If your friend was always throwing garbage on the ground, how would you handle it?
A> I would talk to my friend and ask the friend why he/she always throw garbage on the ground. And I would explain to the friend that your behavior will bother other people and be very irresponsible for the environment. I will try to persuade the friend not to litter on the ground but if the friend doesn't listen to my word, I will not talk to him about it anymore.
사실 위의 답변은 상당히 잘 작성된 답변이라고 볼 수 있겠습니다. 크게 흠잡을 데가 없구요,
다만 아래와 같이 첨석하였습니다.
첨삭한 내용>
I would talk to my friend and ask the friend (불필요한 내용임) why he/she always throws (주어와 수일치)garbage on the ground.
And I would explain to the my friend that your his/her behavior will bother other people and be very irresponsible for the environment.
I will try to persuade the my friend not to litter on the ground but if the friend he/she doesn't listen to my word, I will not talk to him about it anymore.
더 많은 영어표현 배우시려면 저의 유튜브 채널 (아래 링크) 꼭 구독해주세요 ^^
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCtC8jsa3bzghHZ5rrkJVaKw
빠이~
'영어' 카테고리의 다른 글
| Fast Food and Health, # break the bank 파산하다 / 무일푼이 되다 # scarf down 마구 먹어대다 # go overboard 도가 지나치다 / 오버하다 (0) | 2020.07.06 |
|---|---|
| 재택근무 영어로는 working from home 입니다. working at home 아닙니다. (0) | 2020.07.06 |
| 매일 토익 풀기 (0) | 2020.06.29 |
| (예문포함) pick up the slack ~의 공백을 메우다 (0) | 2020.06.25 |
| How IS your family? or How ARE your family? 집합명사(collective nouns) (0) | 2020.06.23 |